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Post by Lady Stark on Dec 15, 2013 19:19:23 GMT -5
I said that they're fur traders and hardy. You want more?
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Post by Prince of Madness on Dec 15, 2013 19:25:25 GMT -5
I thought you said that of Winterclaw...
It's not bad, my thought is that it could be more descriptive to give a better picture for the front page. How's this? It's still your words essentially just rewritten and made longer:
Winterclaw: Located in the middle of the Barren, Winterclaw is the capital city of the largest province and is very isolated from most civilizations. It is well known mostly for its extreme weather conditions, especially it's harsh winters. Thick forests surround Winterclaw and is home to many tundra dwelling animals, this makes Winterclaw a prime trading hub for exotic furs and tough leathers. The people of Winterclaw have to be hardy to survive the long winters and cold summers, they come in a variety of shapes and sizes but are mostly nordic, they come from across the Barren and many have thrilling stories of their journeys across the harsh unforgiving environment.
Provincial Description: Being far north, the Barren is known for some of the harshest environments in the world. A large majority of the land is covered by pine forests, the remaining land is mountainous which guards many towns and villages from the wind that blows across the cold Barren plains, which, if left unguarded, could destroy a town in as short of a time as one winter. There are many cities across the province, however most are small stone towns built on the shores of lakes or the banks of major rivers or streams. In the most isolated and secluded places rest the ancient stone structures which is the final resting place of the dragons of old or soldiers of wars long since fought and done. Some rumors say that the ancient bodies of these soldiers, well preserved for their age, awake from their eternal slumber and walk the halls of these tombs and guard the treasure within.
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Post by Lady Stark on Dec 15, 2013 20:52:36 GMT -5
Sorry if I'm brisk- i had to feed a puppy because sbe was weak...
That's better Danni! *hugs*
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Post by Prince of Madness on Dec 15, 2013 20:58:24 GMT -5
I try. See fantasy is right in my ball park.
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Post by Lady Moose on Dec 15, 2013 22:16:51 GMT -5
Portsmouth: A large town that is this province's trading capital, Portsmouth is a true sight to behold. While it does hold a lot with the bountiful trading centers, the city is truly filled when ports, fish houses, and salt refineries are added to the slew. This city is rich with commerce and its people, while hearty and seemingly ever-busy, can afford a nice night at the pub with friends after the work day is done. Compared to the slums of other fishing towns, this city is a bountiful wonderland, full of people who have gotten extraordinarily lucky with their nautical ventures.
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Dusset is too lazy to log in.
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Post by Dusset is too lazy to log in. on Dec 15, 2013 22:31:45 GMT -5
Anyways, For our planet's name. How about Terha (teh-rah)? Huh? Thoughts?
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Post by Prince of Madness on Dec 15, 2013 22:37:34 GMT -5
Like Terra as in Earth? XD
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Post by Dussie on Dec 15, 2013 22:39:19 GMT -5
Like Tehra. As in... Shut up.
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Post by Lady Stark on Dec 15, 2013 22:52:23 GMT -5
Like Ter-ha. XD
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Post by Dashie on Dec 15, 2013 23:08:35 GMT -5
Terrae sounds cooler.
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